Me and Her

Iris

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My first. Real criticism is welcome. I am a 20-year-old girl.

"Ohh she is so cute, ok I will talk to you later… bye bye". Ciara entering the room while closing her phone after a talk with her best friend.
I'm sleeping in my double bed on my back while one hand on my stomach and the other above my head, on the pillow.
She comes in, puts her bag on a chair, takes off her shoes, climbing the bad and sits on me, every leg on different side of my body and I open my eyes and see her smiling at me, her hands touching gently the sides of my belly and her hair is on one side of her head, she looks very desirable, as always.
I open my mouth to ask what's going on when she puts her finger on my mouth, saying "shhhhhh" and takes off her shirt while exposing underneath it a sexy, red and black bra which leaves nothing to imagination.
I'm too focused at her breasts and do not see the up coming kiss that she gives me.
She moves her hands up and down my body, softly touching my breasts and moving on to the rest of the body, giving a slight touch to my underwear and going back up while taking off my nightgown. She leans to kiss me again and then I rise up, surprising her, holding her at her waist, giving her a real good kiss and opening her bra.
I take her body and switch our positions. Now I am on top of her. I lean to her neck, kiss it softly while feeling her body twisting. She took her pants off.
I move my hands up and down her thighs while moving down her body. When I reach to here breasts on the way up I take off her opened bra and put my hands on her beautifully shaped tits. I put my lips on her right tit, lick the round of her nipple and then suck it gently.
I move my right hand between her legs, rubbing her pussy and make her groan while she twists again. I keep doing that and I move my lips to her flat sexy belly and down to her waist. I take off her matched panties - a job that my mouth has started.

If the comments are positive or there is a demand for more I will continue. :)
 
Nice work Iris, very sexy to hear a story from a female point of view. I enjoyed the story very much, my biggest criticism is your paragraph structure. Breaking your story into easier to read paragraphs would help so much.
 
Powersnake12;492488 said:
Keep it going Iris.

You have my attention.

Tell us every moan and groan.


No doubt! A female on MOS:) She better watch out for the sharks!
 
Thank you so much! All of you!
You give me power to write more :)
 
Iris;493180 said:
Thank you so much! All of you!
You give me power to write more :)

Iris,

The more you write, the more power you feel, the more you want to write.

You know, you can feel comfortable telling us your intimate story, with your words.

We're anticipating it.
 
Powersnake12;493219 said:
Iris,

The more you write, the more power you feel, the more you want to write.


Very true. And the more you write the better you become at telling the story or making the description. There have been many guys who have come here and could barely put two words together but eventually become prolific and well read.
 
Iris;493384 said:
Shall I continue here or post a new threat?


Both! A woman on MOS is rarer than a dude with 3 balls! Continue, please!
 
Have you done underestimatting me? Please, let me know so I will continiue..

You can find (the unfortunately short) continuance in a new thread :)
 
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