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Deuce187

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Heres a song i Finished recording,on some real ass shit!first verse and chorus is me!!Its all true shit,a good part the first verse is about some shit with me n my grl,rest is about my homeboy who is in the pen for killing his girl,because he found out the kid wasnt his!!please listen and give me some feedback....it would be hella apreciated!!!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=600854

You can play Hi fi or lo fi without registering!!
 
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You shouldnt have to,unless something happened when i uploaded it,cause ive had that problem before where it didnt upload the wole song,ill check though.
 
Thats pretty fat- you sound like a mix of everlast and slug from atmosphere. I like your friends part a lot too.
 
Good stuff. It's not my genre of music, but you've got some good talent in that song. :)
 
Not my cup of tea, but you got talent, and I always appreciate talent.
 
The verses were hot, the sample (if that what it was) was dope. The chorus was kinda wack but from the sound of your style you can fix that. Otherwise, you are a real nice producer.


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doublelongdaddy said:
The verses were hot, the sample (if that what it was) was dope. The chorus was kinda wack but from the sound of your style you can fix that. Otherwise, you are a real nice producer.


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He must be straight up gangsta with it too, because he is banned. Not sure if he'll get your message here. ;)

I agree with your comments though. The chorus was the weakness. I also think it was a good production. I know quite a few pretty well successful producers - though not truly major - and have overseen production and mastering .... and this was pretty well put together.

It made me think of Baby Bash and Frankie J (names I forgot and needed to think of for 5 minutes and dig up on mtv.com ) - with their song: Suga Suga
YouTube - Suga Suga by Baby Bash

I'm glad that it reminded me of them, by the way, because it reminded me of a much more talented song by Frankie J - Obsession:
YouTube - Frankie J - obsession
 
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